Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.

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are of the opinion that, with
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diminishing every year, it is believed
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a positive impact on
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by promoting more peace and compatibility
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them. There are many pros and cons to
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belief and I am of the opinion that
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nation having a single
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would certainly help in maintaining amicable relationships. Some of the Countries,
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a single
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share a better bond compared to the rest.
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helps them to maintain a balance in the nation with no discrimination, as they speak the same
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and they find comfort
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communicating. The bonding between
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becomes stronger when you find that comfort
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communicating with the other.
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, the Chinese
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speak
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Mandarin
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strongest bond amongst them and share a great relationship
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their kind.
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, there are others who think that with the lost
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, a lot of history and their culture is forgotten. In a country like India, where
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come from diverse backgrounds with different
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, it becomes difficult to find that common ground to interact with another person which has caused a lot of disparity amongst
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. In India, every State has a different
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and when we travel to a different State, it becomes difficult to communicate as they may not know their
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, though they may have different
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the national
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i.e., Hindi could be used to communicate. There have been instances where
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expect you to speak in their local
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as discussed
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there are pros and cons to it and I believe that usage of single
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promotes better
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relationship
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members
and the country together could strive for better development of the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic biodiversity
  • cultural homogeneity
  • dilutes
  • erases
  • unique forms
  • streamline
  • cognitive diversity
  • facilitate
  • marginalize
  • historical heritage
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