The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information on  cinema attendance  in the UK. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the graph compares the information of four different age
groups
on
cinema
attendance
in the UK from 1990 to 2010.
it is clear that
the
number
aged 44-54 was highest among the other three
groups
. and in 2000,the
number
of
cinema
attendance
of all
groups
was lowest .and the
number
of four age
groups
showed a similar trend from 1990 to 2010. from 1990 to 1995 ,the
number
of
cinema
attendance
increased rapidly from 37% to 40% and down to 37% in 2000 aged 44-54,and the
number
of
cinema
attendance
was 36% in 1990 to 37% in 1995 decreased significantly to 31% in 2000.and the figure for the
cinema
attendance
at aged 24-34 from 23% up to 29% and
then
down to 21% in 2000. the figure for
cinema
attendance
for ages 14-24 from 15% increased by 1% and
then
down to 11%. from 2000 to 2010, the
number
of all aged
groups
increased dramatically from 37% to 51% aged 44-54, from 31% to 42% aged 34-44 ,from 22% to 32% aged 24-34 and from 15% to 21% at aged 14-24.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, cinema, attendance, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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