The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many men and women in higher education
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whether
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they took
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full-time or part-time
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education
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in three periods in Britain.
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, male and female students who took the full-time education were fewer than those who took part-time
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in the frame period. Male students, Female Students
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