Write a letter to one of your colleagues has recently been appointed as the new manager of the company. Introduce yourself Congratulate him/her on the promotion And ask for an appintment to discuss the problems in your section.

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Dear Jiten, I have seen the email communicated by HR stating that you have been promoted

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IT manager from your Tech lead post. I am very glad to hear

this

great news. Since we have never met, I would like to introduce myself. I have been working in the IT Support team as an engineer on the Axon project for the

last

3 years. I would be happy to work under your supervision from now onwards with new strategies and ideas. Congratulation on your recent advancement in the company hierarchy as Manager of the IT team! I am happy that you have landed

this

position after a long and deserving tenure. I would be looking forward to setting up a meeting to discuss ongoing concerns in my department regarding projects and customer feedback.

Due to

lack of required training, we are unable to deliver the task on time in a perfect way and that's increasing many complaints from customers. I am happy to be part of your team and looking forward to your support to resolve current concerns. Yours faithfully, Kamal

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Write a letter to one of your colleagues has recently been appointed as the new manager of the company. Introduce yourself Congratulate him/her on the promotion And ask for an appintment to discuss the problems in your section.

Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this apositive or negative development?