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The map below show an industrial area in the town of knowington and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

The map below show an industrial area in the town of knowington and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
Two images illustrate the construction of current and future
plannings
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plans
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 for the
town
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 of Norbington.
Overall
Linking Words
,
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town
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a town
the town
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at
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of
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 Norbington,
industrials
Correct article usage
the industrials
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 zone become more friendly for
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the resident
a resident
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resident
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residents
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. There will be more houses constructed and all the factory space will be wiped away. At present, in the
town
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 most of the surface
covered
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is covered
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 by
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a menwork
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menwork
Correct your spelling
men work
 factories zone, connected to
circular
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a circular
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 way, which was directly
along with
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Southest
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Southeast
 main way. Farming areas were separated
at
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apply
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the
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apply
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one
side
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 of the river, which is located top of the map and
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town
Correct article usage
the town
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 for people is
on
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in
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 the west direction. In future, another round junction will be constructed on
Correct article usage
the mainway
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mainway
Correct your spelling
main way
manway
, which would be helped to reach
central
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the central
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 circle area of the
town
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. As per observation, plenty of necessary things may have constructed in future.
Such
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 as
,
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apply
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medical
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the medical
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 centre will be on the right hand and other shops will be on the left of hand infrastructure, when
move
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moving
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 to
big
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a big
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 circle from
small
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a small
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 one. On the left
side
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 from the
centre
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,centre
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 there will be one playground before going to school and houses for people planned
both
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on both
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side
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sides
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 of the way. Other accommodations will be on the Northwest
side
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 from
centre
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the centre
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 and on the farmland at the North. A bridge will be constructed on the river to go to
farm
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the farm
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 housing zone.
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Town
Correct article usage
The town
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 area will be as same as present.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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