The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic games. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
The given table depicts the top ten countries which won the medal in the London Olympic Games in the year 2012.
Overall
, it is apparent that the United States won the highest number
of medals
while
the least number
of medals
won
by Hungary in Add a missing verb
was won
this
Olympic Games.
According to
the given information USA won the highest number
of medals
, and they also
got the highest number
of Gold
and Silver recorded as 46 and 29 respectively. China hold
the second Change the verb form
holds
position
with 88 medals
which included 38 Gold
, 27 Silver and 23 Bronze. South Korea was in 5th position
with 28 medals
. Russia won more medals
than the UK but still was at
4th Change preposition
in
position
because UK participants won more Gold
medals
so, that’s why the UK was in 3rd position
.
Furthermore
the other countries, Germany, France, Italy, Hungary and Australia won Add a comma
,Furthermore
medals
ranging in
between 17 to 45. Change preposition
apply
Least
Correct article usage
The least
Gold
medals
won
by Australia, and they were in the 10th Add a missing verb
were won
position
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