The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data regarding subway systems from large cities in parts of the world, showing the number of stations in operation, kilometres of the route and daily passenger numbers in millions
Overall
,
London
and
Moscow
have the longest train system, compared to Paris, which is relatively high numbers of operations. Passengers for
Moscow
are the highest,
in contrast
to
London
, which has the lowest number of daily passengers. The
London
Underground
,
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is the most extensive with 408 kilometres of route. The railway system in Paris is approximately half in its size and serves more operations. The railway system in
Moscow
is the busiest of the three with 6.5 million customers daily and 300 kilometres of route. The station figure in
London
is the second highest, and the least in
Moscow
(275 and 182, respectively).
While
the amount of daily customers in Paris is 2 million less than in
Moscow
while
London
is 3.3 million less.
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