The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates data regarding subway systems from large cities in parts of the world, showing the number of stations in operation, kilometres of the route and daily passenger numbers in millions
Overall
, Linking Words
London
and Use synonyms
Moscow
have the longest train system, compared to Paris, which is relatively high numbers of operations. Passengers for Use synonyms
Moscow
are the highest, Use synonyms
in contrast
to Linking Words
London
, which has the lowest number of daily passengers.
The Use synonyms
London
UndergroundUse synonyms
,
is the most extensive with 408 kilometres of route. The railway system in Paris is approximately half in its size and serves more operations. The railway system in Remove the comma
apply
Moscow
is the busiest of the three with 6.5 million customers daily and 300 kilometres of route. The station figure in Use synonyms
London
is the second highest, and the least in Use synonyms
Moscow
(275 and 182, respectively). Use synonyms
While
the amount of daily customers in Paris is 2 million less than in Linking Words
Moscow
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
London
is 3.3 million less.Use synonyms
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