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Writing Task 1: The percentage of people who accessed news from 4 sources from 1995 and projection to 2025

#percentage #people #news #sources #projection
The line chart above shows the
percentage
 of
people
 viewing
news
 from 4
sources
 since 1995 and forecast to 2025. The
percentage
 of
people
 watching
news
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the news
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 in general in 4
sources
: TV, newspaper,
radio
 and
internet
 has increased and decreased differently since 2010. Specifically charts for 4
sources
 that have a high
percentage
 of
news
 viewers.
In which
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, we can see that 3
sources
 out of all
hae
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have
 a decreasing trend and only the
internet
 has an increasing trend year by year.
For example
, starting in 1995 when the
internet
 stopped at zero
percent
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per cent
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 and over 30 years it increased to 56%.
In contrast
 to the
internet
, there is a decreasing trend in TV, newspaper and
radio
 in the period from 2010 to 2025. The
percentage
 of
people
 watching
news
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the news
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 from TV, newspapers and
radio
 decreased to 50%, 30% and 22% respectively
according to
 the survey forecast
to
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for
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 2025. The special thing is that
arounđ 2000
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around 2,000
 newspapers and
radio
 stations have the same
percentage
 of
news
 viewers. In conclusion, the chart above shows the
percentage
 of
people
 watching
news
of
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over
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 the years from the above 4
sources
 and
show
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shows
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 their increase and decrease in each different period.
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