Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individual and society?

It is claimed that

tourism

is becoming one of the developing

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this

industry brings a lot of merits in many sectors.

This

essay will discuss the pros of

tourism

to personal and civilization.

To begin

, we must admit that the tourist industry

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some great advantage

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.The reason is that citizens are tending to travel to feel personal solace after hours of study and hard work.

Therefore

tourism

has solved the entertainment needs of people.

In addition

, travelling brings people in the family closer together and

also

becomes a method to educate children.

For example

, my parents are busy with work so they always take advantage of taking the family to travel both to bring everyone together and to broaden our horizons of the outside world.

In addition

, tourist

service

also

takes great benefits to society.

First,

investment

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for

tourism

are quite low , but the income is the highest in all economic sectors . In fact , landscape

service

helped promote the resort to all parts of the world.

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, Cao Bang mountainous province in Vietnam became a famous tourist destination with

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waterfall

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and suitable

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, so it has created

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for ethnic minority families,

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to consume local products . In conclusion,

tourism

take

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a lot of advantages from big to small for each individual

in particular

and the whole society in general. In my view, the

tourism

service

industry will become a major turning point in the economic development of regions , especially places with many beautiful natural resources.