The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the changes in the
percentage
of
households
owning and renting
accommodation
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the
percentage
of
households
in owned
accommodation
presents an upward trend,
while
the
percentage
of
households
in rented
accommodation
shows a downward trend.
However
, the contrary situation happened in 2011, and the
percentage
of
households
owning and renting
accommodation
was equal in 1971. The
percentage
of
households
owning
accommodation
was from 23% in 1918 up to nearly 70% in 2001, and more than the
percentage
of
households
renting
accommodation
by 20%. The
percentage
of
households
owning
accommodation
was from nearly 80% in 1918 down to only 30% in 2001. An interesting situation that people wanting to own
accommodation
is recovering,
whereas
interest in renting
accommodation
is reducing, appeared in 2011.
This
situation may relate to the development of the economy.
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