The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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graph illustrates the changes in the
percentage
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of
households
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owning and renting
accommodation
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of
households
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in owned
accommodation
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presents an upward trend,
while
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the
percentage
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of
households
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in rented
accommodation
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shows a downward trend.
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, the contrary situation happened in 2011, and the
percentage
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of
households
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owning and renting
accommodation
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was equal in 1971. The
percentage
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of
households
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owning
accommodation
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was from 23% in 1918 up to nearly 70% in 2001, and more than the
percentage
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of
households
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renting
accommodation
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by 20%. The
percentage
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of
households
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owning
accommodation
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was from nearly 80% in 1918 down to only 30% in 2001. An interesting situation that people wanting to own
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is recovering,
whereas
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interest in renting
accommodation
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is reducing, appeared in 2011.
This
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situation may relate to the development of the economy.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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