The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing in three ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing  in three ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the graph compares the percentages of young
people
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choosing three ways to solve global warming in four different countries in 2008.
it is clear that
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the
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of young
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choosing different ways to solve global warming in Portugal was the largest
while
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the
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of young
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choosing
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regulations
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to solve global warming in Holland was the smallest. the
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of young
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choosing a lifestyle to solve global warming in Portugal was 45%,and the
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of young
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choosing
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regulations
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was the same as the
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of advanced technology was 40% was higher than the other three countries .coversly, the
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of the young
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choosing
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regulations
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to solve the global warming in holland was lowest at 10% ,and the
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of lifestyles was 13%,and other ways showed the same trend at 30% which as same as the
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of none of these on Portugal . the
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of young
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choosing advanced technology to solve global warming in Poland at 10%
while
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choosing none of these was the same as the
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of lifestyles was 20% .in Romania, the
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of
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choosing
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regulations
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and advanced technology was 20%,and the none of these was lowest than other three types at 12%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, number, government, regulations, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 8 times.
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