The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing in three ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing  in three ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the graph compares the percentages of young
people
choosing three ways to solve global warming in four different countries in 2008.
it is clear that
the
number
of young
people
choosing different ways to solve global warming in Portugal was the largest
while
the
number
of young
people
choosing
government
regulations
to solve global warming in Holland was the smallest. the
percentage
of young
people
choosing a lifestyle to solve global warming in Portugal was 45%,and the
percentage
of young
people
choosing
government
regulations
was the same as the
percentage
of advanced technology was 40% was higher than the other three countries .coversly, the
percentage
of the young
people
choosing
government
regulations
to solve the global warming in holland was lowest at 10% ,and the
percentage
of lifestyles was 13%,and other ways showed the same trend at 30% which as same as the
percentage
of none of these on Portugal . the
number
of young
people
choosing advanced technology to solve global warming in Poland at 10%
while
the
number
of
people
choosing none of these was the same as the
number
of lifestyles was 20% .in Romania, the
percentage
of
people
choosing
government
regulations
and advanced technology was 20%,and the none of these was lowest than other three types at 12%.
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