The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

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The two plans below illustrate the sites of an
airport
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now and after redevelopment next year how it will look.
Firstly
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,
while
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we look at the current
airport
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, we can see there are a total of 8 gates for the entrance and exit of the passengers.
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entering the
airport
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they need to overgo the security of their passports. As they pass through security checkups, they can overlook cafes and check-in sections and at ,
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they can see one departure gate. Comparatively, after ,redevelopment they will be seeing
overall
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eighteen gates for entrance and exit. When you enter you will be seeing shops. After ,that as you go through security you will see that cafe and check-in sections have been rearranged and additional bag drop sections have been added.
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instead
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of one departure ,gate there will be two.
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, when you see the part where we arrive at the current
airport
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there are no facilities available in the area, compared after redevelopment when we arrive there has been a car hire section, an ATM and a cafe.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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