TOPIC: In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly argued that the authorities in many nations are justified in imposing a strict ban on smoking in public areas.
This
essay totally agrees with that statement because public places
are where most people
’s health can be adversely affected and those who smoke
in the company of many others will set a bad example for young generations.
The first reason why I consider it imperative that smokers
be fined or punished for their acts in public locations is that puffing a cigarette in those places
can put the majority of people
’s health at risk. This
is because public places
are where a huge number of pedestrians, cyclists or office workers prefer to gather, and, as a result
, allowing someone to smoke
at their leisure in those places
exposes many others to passive smoke
, which in turn leads to more respiratory diseases such
as lung cancer or breathing problems. That is
why almost no restaurants or hotels in Vietnam allow their patrons, visitors and staff to smoke
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with a view to preventing them from doing harm to other people
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Further
support for my agreement with prohibition is that adolescents may model themselves as smokers
in public places
. As juveniles at impressionable ages are prone to mimicking what adults can legitimately do such
as drinking or getting tattooed, the image of lighting a cigarette and creating a bubble from it stylishly in front of their awestruck friends can tempt youngsters into trying smoking first and then
becoming compulsive smokers
. Therefore
, allowing adults to smoke
in parks, shopping malls or game centres often frequented by young people
may lead to a higher proportion of young smoking addicts in the future. For instance
, many high school students in Vietnam are reported to secretly take up smoking after seeing their fathers or other family members consume a cigarette in crowded places
.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that prohibiting people
from smoking in public places
is justifiable because that would protect the public’s health from second-hand smoke
and deter young people
from becoming future smokers
.Submitted by khangtram1203 on
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