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You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter •explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company •say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her • tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
 to inform you about my future plans, As you know , I have completed my master's degree recently and got the work authorization letter. Thank you so much for offering me the full-time opportunity in
this
 company,
however
, I have decided to pursue a career in a different field.
Hence
, I need to leave
this
 organization. First of all, I must tell you that, I completely enjoyed working with you because you are a talented and lovable person. I learned a lot of new things
while
 working under your direction.
Moreover
, I admire you because of your people management skills.
Also
, I would like to inform you that, I am available till next month, so I hope you can find my replacement soon so that I can hand over my work to my successor. Please consider
this
 as my official notice and do the needful on the same. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Janardhan Employee Id : 1234
Submitted by janardhan.gangineni on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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