The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph displays the
population
of different nations in 2003,
along with
it, the estimated figures for 2025 and 2050 respectively.
Overall
, the
population
in most nations will experience an upward trend, in which Indonesia accounted for the largest proportion, compared to Argentina which contains the least
population
.
On the other hand
, Italy is the only region that will lose residents in the future. In 2003, Indonesia displayed the largest
population
at 238
million
, the number will keep growing in the next 47 years to 312
million
by 2050. The
population
in Argentina displayed the least figure at 34
million
in 2003,
is
Correct word choice
but is
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going to experience a surge in the following years to 62
million
by 2050.
On the other hand
, the
population
In Italy was the second largest group in 2003 at 54
million
,
however
, the data will undergo a drastic drop to 45
million
in 2050. As for the
population
of the Republic of Korea, the number was 48
million
in 2003.
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