The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the process for producing concrete for building by using
cement
two
steps and several
Correct quantifier usage
pieces of equipment
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equipment
Change to a plural noun
equipments
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.
Overall
, there are
two
main stages for producing concrete, including producing
cement
as raw material and using it to create concrete.
Besides
, there are
two
materials
needed in producing
cement
and additional three
materials
for concrete except for
cement
.
The first step is
cement
production. First of all, the original
materials
,limestone and clay are crushed into powder by a crusher.
Second,
the powder is delivered into a mixer for a complete mix of
two
materials
and sent to the next section of the equipment, a heater.
Third,
the mixed item is heated in a rotating heater by a heating device at its bottom and
then
falls to a conveyor belt.
Finally
, through the belt and grounded by a grinder, the
cement
is already created and
then
packaged into bags preparing for the next step. The second step is concrete production.
Cement
, water, sand, and gravel composed of small stones are mixed and blended with the proportion of 15%,10%,25%, and 50% respectively into a clockwise concrete mixer. And eventually finishing the process of producing concrete.
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