The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the process for producing concrete for building by using
cement
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two
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steps and several
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pieces of equipment
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equipment
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equipments
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.
Overall
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, there are
two
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main stages for producing concrete, including producing
cement
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as raw material and using it to create concrete.
Besides
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, there are
two
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materials
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needed in producing
cement
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and additional three
materials
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for concrete except for
cement
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.
The first step is
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cement
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production. First of all, the original
materials
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,limestone and clay are crushed into powder by a crusher.
Second,
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the powder is delivered into a mixer for a complete mix of
two
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materials
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and sent to the next section of the equipment, a heater.
Third,
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the mixed item is heated in a rotating heater by a heating device at its bottom and
then
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falls to a conveyor belt.
Finally
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, through the belt and grounded by a grinder, the
cement
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is already created and
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packaged into bags preparing for the next step. The second step is concrete production.
Cement
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, water, sand, and gravel composed of small stones are mixed and blended with the proportion of 15%,10%,25%, and 50% respectively into a clockwise concrete mixer. And eventually finishing the process of producing concrete.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, two, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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