The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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chart explains the average of recycling between different materials over nearly thirty years. In Linking Words
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essay, we are going to show the differences and similarities among the percentages of four materials since 2010.
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, the importance of every Linking Words
stuff
did not Correct your spelling
staff
change
over thirty years. In fact, in 1982 the most recycled thing was paper but, it is the same even in 2010. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the other materials mirrored Linking Words
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trend, Linking Words
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, they did not Linking Words
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the order at all.
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on the other hand
, the values did not remain steady, except for the plastic one that never achieved a rate over 10%. Linking Words
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, in essence, aluminium cans' recycling increased by over 45% like a straight line. Linking Words
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, the other two values did not Linking Words
change
their percentage that much in fact, they increased by around 10%.
In conclusion, we can say that between 1982 and 2010 the trend did not Use synonyms
change
but, every category increased.Use synonyms
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