The pie charts show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The pie charts compare the shares of four different e-commerce retail
sales
categories, such
as travel, film or music, books and clothes in New Zealand in individual years 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of film, music and book sales
had increased over the 10-year period, while
the travel and clothing sectors were in the opposite position.
According to
the first chart, in 2003, the online sales
of travel industries in New Zealand accounted for 36% of the total sector, which was 12% higher than the clothing sector. However
, in 2013, both figures declined dramatically to 29% and 16% respectively.
The second chart shows that there was a significant change in entertainment, it is noticed that film/music sales
figure had risen sharply by 12% and reached 33% in 2013. Likewise
, the online sales
of books had increased slightly from 19% in 2003 to 22% in 2013.Submitted by bkhojiakbar on
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