Many people are working at home rather than work place. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but other suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

During the pandemic, many organizations allowed
work
from
home
for their employees. Even after the re-opening of enterprises, a lot of employees prefer to stay back and continue working from
home
instead
of going to
office
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. Few people argue that mixing
work
and family may create tensions at
home
,
however
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I disagree with
this
point of view. I believe that the flexibility of working
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from
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home
brings
in
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more balance in people's
life
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and is more beneficial for the
housefold
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household
as it allows family bonding. In
this
essay, I will
disucss
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discuss
both
the
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views, and explain with examples my support for the concept of
work
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from
home
. The primary reason why many reject the idea of staying at
home
for
work
,
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is the perceived belief that it will create friction in the house. Working from
home
requires a
quite
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quiet
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and calm environment, which is difficult to attain at
home
,
this
may result in kids getting scolded for making noise or differences between partners for not being respectful of each others' space.
For instance
, if both
the
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partners are working,
the
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taking calls at the same
time
in a small
home
is
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challenging since the sounds may create
disturbance
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.
However
, these challenges can be managed by setting clear expectations with the bosses and effective
time
management.
On the other hand
, the biggest advantage of working from
home
is the abundance of
time
for self and for family. Since one does not have to go to the
office
, a lot of commute
time
and dressing up
time
is saved to use.
For example
, if a worker takes 1
hours
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hour
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to travel from
home
to his
office
on
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in
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the morning, he can utilize the same hour to do something meaningful like yoga,
excercise
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exercise
or any skill development
for
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oneself
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himself
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.
Further
staying back
home
also
gives a person enough
time
to spend with their loved ones when they are not working. A recent survey demonstrated that people spending 8 hours in
office
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effectively
work
for only 5 hours and spend more
time
in miscellaneous and
unnessary
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unnecessary
activities.
Therefore
, a person staying at
home
can
work
efficiently
while
also
eating, laughing and doing chores with the family thereby strengthening the bond. In conclusion,
while
some may think that bringing
work
in
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home
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is not an ideal situation for
an
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household, I strongly
beleive
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believe
working from
home
has larger benefits like bringing family together and focusing on
self development
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self-development
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.
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