The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The graph demonstrates the
percentage
of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet ranging from a period of 60 years
starting from 1960. The initial percentage
was 0% corresponding with the year 1960. The percentage
gradually and consistently increase
as the Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
years
increases by 10 until it reach the highest percent
in 1980. Change the spelling
per cent
This
means that within 20 years
, the percentage
had increase
from 0% to 15%. In the year 1980, the Change the verb form
increased
percentage
of adolescents following a vegetable diet reaches 15%. After that, there is a gradual decrease in percentage
from 1980 to 1990 starting from 15% and down to an estimate
Replace the word
estimated
of
5% to 6%. In 10 Change preposition
apply
years
between 1990 and 2000, many changes are shown in the percentage
. This
is where many outliers take place in the chart, there are
no Change the verb form
is
consistence
Correct your spelling
consistency
increase
or Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
decrease
in Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
this
10 years
period. Instead
, the percentage
goes inconsistently up and down. The lowest percent
in Replace the word
percentage
this
10 years
period is below 5% and the highest is approximately 7% to 8%. From 2000 to 2010, the chart demonstrates a consistent increase
from 5% to 10%. And finally
, from the last
10 years
, 2010
to 2020, the Change preposition
from 2010
percentage
of adolescents following a vegetarian diet remains relatively the same at 10% with little changes.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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