The chart below shows estimated world literacy rate by region and by gender for the year 2000.
The bar graphs illustrate the
illiteracy
rate in 6 different regions
and genders in 2000.
Overall
, it is obvious from the graphs that females
in all 6 regions
are less literate than males. Moreover
, people with the highest rate of illiteracy
from
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are from
while
residents of developed countries have the least level of illiteracy
.
The interesting point is that in all regions
women’s education level is lower than men's. Thus
, the illiteracy
rate of women in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Africa ranged from 48% to 55%, while
uneducated men made up from 29% to 34%.
In addition
, the uneducated proportion of females
in East Asia/Oceania made up 20% and it was 10 times higher than illiterate females
in developed countries. Also
, the illiteracy
level of males and females
in those regions
constituted 8% and 1%, respectively. One region which had almost similar illiteracy
proportion of both males and females
was Latin America, which made up 10% and 12%, respectively.Submitted by ravshankhasanov99 on
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