The chart below shows estimated world literacy rate by region and by gender for the year 2000.

The chart below shows estimated world literacy rate by region and by gender for the year 2000.
The bar graphs illustrate the
illiteracy
rate in 6 different
regions
and genders in 2000.
Overall
, it is obvious from the graphs that
females
in all 6
regions
are less literate than males.
Moreover
, people with the highest rate of
illiteracy
from
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South Asia,
while
residents of developed countries have the least level of
illiteracy
. The interesting point is that in all
regions
women’s education level is lower than men's.
Thus
, the
illiteracy
rate of women in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Africa ranged from 48% to 55%,
while
uneducated men made up from 29% to 34%.
In addition
, the uneducated proportion of
females
in East Asia/Oceania made up 20% and it was 10 times higher than illiterate
females
in developed countries.
Also
, the
illiteracy
level of males and
females
in those
regions
constituted 8% and 1%, respectively. One region which had almost similar
illiteracy
proportion of both males and
females
was Latin America, which made up 10% and 12%, respectively.
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