Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

In

current

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era, our planet's habitats and ecosystems are at an alarming risk

due to

anthropogenic activities which are resulting in huge losses to biodiversity and leading to extinctions at

an unprecedented rates

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than ever before. There are numerous known causes for global biodiversity loss;

however

, one of the two major causes that

drives

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species

to extinction is

over-population

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overpopulation

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. Cities are now built over clearing natural habitats that eliminate indigenous flora and fauna mercilessly. Unplanned urbanization to accommodate more humans

replace

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natural forest cover with concrete jungles which results in

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loss of biomass as a whole. The next major issue is

over-hunting

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due to

easy access to firearms. Unregulated hunting puts a lot of pressure on existing ecosystems and

species

, especially when augmented by poaching. To deal with

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forces

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that are driving

species

to the brink of extinction

as well as

their habitats, it is necessary to start building eco-friendly houses in order to cause minimum damage to the landscapes. In

such

cases, human-wildlife co-existence can promote tolerance and lessen the tension between either

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to that, a ban on hunting weapons should be put into practice with strict lawful regulations. It will ease pressure on game animals and will eventually lead their dwindling populations to bounce back to normal. I In conclusion, nature is very resilient. If given a chance, it can thrive efficiently.

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as

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sustainable and well-planned urban development to benefit blooming population growths and

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putting unnecessary pressures on delicate ecosystems,

as well as

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by

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showing more kindness to every

species

rather than killing can give them equal chance to live in harmony

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the same planet we both shares for ages.