The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes in the village of
Meadowside
and the
town
of
Fonton
from 1962 to now. There are three different times it was 1962, 1985, and the present. In 1962 the
Meadowside
and the
town
of
Fonton
were not developed yet. The
town
was still empty land without any buildings or roads. Twenty-three years later, the road was built through the
Meadowside
and
Fonton
. At that time, both towns were connected by one road and the other road was built through the
Meadowside
. On other hand,
Meadowside
Village was developed, and the
was
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housing
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estate, leisure complex and superstore.
On the other hand
,
Fonton
has no development. At present,
Meadowside
Village becoming
Meadowside
Suburb and both of the towns are experiencing expansion areas. Between Meadwoside and
Fonton
there are some buildings namely Hotel, station and business park.
Fonton
still being empty land without any development.
To sum up
,
Meadowside
experienced some developments year by year.
Instead
, Fenton is a
town
without development.
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