The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012.
The line graph provides a comparison among 4 categories in terms of the sources of
energy
produced in France over a period of 3 decades.
Overall
, the main feature of the data is that nuclear power
stations had demonstrated the primary form of electricity over that duration, however
, using renewables as a power
source amounted to a negligible number.
Initially
, it is evident that in 1980 thermal energy
provided the most important means of electricity amounting to over 100 (TW-h), while
nuclear and hydroelectric power
started at roughly the same point which is almost 55 (TW per hour). In addition
, between the period 1980 to 2000 renewables source of energy
was showing stability.
By 1980 nuclear energy
overtook thermal power
with a sharp increase reaching a peak in 2005 amounting to just below 450 (TW-h). In contrast
, thermal energy
saw a dramatic drop in 1980. It can be clearly seen that over that term hydroelectric power
remained fluctuating ,,
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