The diagrams below show the life cycle of a spieces of a large fish called the salmon. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The drawing below illustrates the
life
cycle of the salmon
, which is a large fish spieces
.
Correct your spelling
species
Overall
, an
Correct article usage
the
life
of salmon
is nine years and their life
cycle consists of four main stages: egg, fry, smolt and adult salmon
. While
the first three stages take place in fresh water, the last
one takes place in saline water.
The life
cycle begins when salmon
eggs are laid among small stones at the base of reeds in the upper part of the river, where the river is slow. After approximately five to six months, the fry which measures three to eight centimetres long can be seen in the water. Then
it swims to the lower, faster-flowing part of the river. After growing and feeding there for about four years they reach twelve to fifteen centimetres long and are considered smolts. They then
head to the ocean where they spend around five years there to grow up and they mature into adult salmon
which average seventy to seventy-six centimetres long.
After which they migrate upstream to their born place to spawn, and the entire journey is repeated all over again.Submitted by jasmin6pham on
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