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You recently organised and old a meeting for your company. Which took place in local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the managers should do to improve the food in future

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Dear manager of the
hotel
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, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my feedback to the
hotel
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.
To begin
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 with, I visited your
hotel
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due to
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 a meeting for my company which I had organized 2 weeks ago. In their feedback , participants at the meeting said that they were not happy about the food that was served for lunch. More specifically, they said the food
was
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looked perfect and well prepared,
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, it was cold and it didn’t taste as they expected. Especially the fish was too salty and the desert was too sweet.
In addition
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, the soup was too hot to drink. Having said that, the participants said the service at the front counter was
quiet
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 great. From the greeting to the ending, their hospitality was more than they expected.
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, in my opinion, tasting should be held
in
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certain
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 frequency. That can improve
quality
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the quality
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 of food in
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hotel
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. Yours Sincerely,
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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