You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter •Give details of your visit to the restaurant •Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the services

Dear Sir, I am writing with pleasure to share my experience at your restaurant located at Anne Steet, Toronto. I was there with some friends on Sunday evening for dinner, and I was extremely delighted by the service I received. My friend recently received a big job in the United States, and we

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gathered to celebrate his success

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and to

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bid him farewell. Since

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evening in the city, we wanted the evening to be special for him.

Although

it was peak dinner hours at the eatery, the service was swift,

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ensuring that each table was properly attended. The servers were pleasant and even accommodated us in the private corner

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to have quality time. The staff even surprised us with a lovely cake when they understood the occasion.

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showed how much they cared about the customer.

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, we had a wonderful time there. We hope that the good service will be continued in future. Yours faithfully Apoorva