The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line chart below compares the percentage of
people
from four different age groups in a particular country from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, the folks between 44 and 54 by far were the main source of cinema attendance in the UK, while
the people
aged 14-24 showed the least interest in the film. Additionally
, the total trend of the number of citizens who entered the cinema was upward.
It is clear that
the four different age groups saw a slight rise in the first five years, the figure for the people
aged between 44 and 54 reached 40%, followed by those from 34-44 at 38%, 24-34 at 28%, and 14-24 at 16%. However
, in the sequent five years, they all dropped by within 5%. Between 2000 and 2010, there was a remarkedly growth in the number of citizens attending the cinema from 38% in 2000 to more one half 10 2010.
Apart from
this
, the proportion of people
from 14-34 nearly levelled off in the last
five years at 21% and 32% respectively. As for those between 34-44, it finally
arrived at 44%.Submitted by jiangnata0408 on
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