Some people think that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, the most important

subject

to learn in School is debatable. On one hand,

people

think

that is

History

,

on the other hand

, it is surely

Science

and

Technology

.

This

essay will explain both of these arguments and provide evidence on why the importance of studying

history

is superior. The first argument is that

people

believe

History

is far more significant than the other. Mainly because

history

can teach us how to make a better

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regardless

how

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of how

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critical the situation is.

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, the struggle of Indonesian prior to

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Independence

day

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Day

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on 17th August 1945. There was a series of events from

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debate about

wheter

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whether

this

is the right time to declare independence or not, to physical fighting and war with the colonizer.

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story has a meaning for us to never give up in

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time of crisis.

Thus

, for

this

value,

people

strongly state that

History

is the most important

subject

.

On the contrary

,

people

think

Science

and

Technology

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the most relevant today. It guides us to understand our nature and

teach

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teaches

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us how to use it for our

wellbeing

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well-being

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. Take Biotechnology as an example.

According to

recent research done by a team at the University of Indonesia, we have as much as

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% decreasing

number of

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the

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mortality rate for heart disease cases.

This

is because we understand the knowledge and the necessary

technology

for performing

a

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heart surgery. So, it's can't

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that for these

benefit

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,

Science

and

Technology

is number one. In my personal opinion, despite of different values that those subjects bring, learning

History

is more vital than the other in school. It is more

approriate

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appropriate

for students to get exposed

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so many perspectives on how to conduct their life.

History

can support that because we are

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a force

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force

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to read and learn not only special events but

also

the biography of many great individuals.

Then

, in college or higher

education

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they can add

Science

and

Technology

. In

conlusion

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conclusion

, different

people

support different

subject

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subjects

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based on their

priority

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priorities

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and for

me

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history

is the most important and right

subject

to study in school.