the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of noutrientd, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The pie charts illustrate the comparison between

sodium

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, saturated fat, and added

sugar

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in four types of meals (

breakfast

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, lunch,

dinner

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, and snacks) in the USA.

Overall

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dinner

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is more likely to contain the highest of the three nutrients except for added

sugar

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In contrast

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breakfast

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has the lowest three of them, which may the healthiest one. Both

sodium

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and saturated fat are the biggest contributors to

dinner

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with percentages of 43% and 37% respectively.

Furthermore

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, lunch is in second place with

sodium

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(29%) and saturated fat (26%). Ranging from 14% to 21%,

breakfast

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and snacks tend to be less in

sodium

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and saturated fat.

However

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, the added

sugar

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was significantly high in snacks by 42% of it.

Moreover

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, 23% of added

sugar

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is contained in

dinner

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meals, followed by lunch meals with a discrepancy of 4% compared to

dinner

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. Meanwhile, the least added

sugar

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contained in

breakfast

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with only 16%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, dinner with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of noutrientd, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Write a letter to your friend about a recent trip you enjoyed. Include: Where you went What you did there Why you enjoyed it

5.Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year. It can make them perform better in their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?