The chart below shows the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The chart below shows the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
The given pie charts provide information about the
energy
produced by a country using 6 difficult sources from 1985 to 2003. In general, the main source from which the
energy
was produced was oil with
52
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% contribution in 1985.
Likewise
, in 2003 oil contributed 39%
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energy
production. But compared to 1985 the
reliability
of natural gas to manufacture
energy
increased from 1% to 4% and 8% to 13% respectively.
On the other hand
,
reliability
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to manufacture
energy
on nuclear was 22% in 1985 which
reduced
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to 17% by 2003.
While
the
reliability
on
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most of the resources fluctuated, the
reliability
on
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hydrogen remained constant
4
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at 4
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%.
Overall
from 1985 to 2003 oil stayed the main source of
energy
production and other renewable resources remained the least.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, reliability with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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