The chart below shows the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
The given pie charts provide information about the
energy
produced by a country using 6 difficult sources from 1985 to 2003.
In general, the main source from which the energy
was produced was oil with 52
% contribution in 1985. Correct article usage
a 52
Likewise
, in 2003 oil contributed 39% in
Change preposition
of
energy
production. But compared to 1985 the reliability
of natural gas to manufacture energy
increased from 1% to 4% and 8% to 13% respectively.
On the other hand
, reliability
to manufacture Correct article usage
the reliability
energy
on nuclear was 22% in 1985 which reduced
to 17% by 2003. Add a missing verb
was reduced
While
the reliability
on
most of the resources fluctuated, the Change preposition
of
reliability
on
hydrogen remained constantChange preposition
of
4
%. Change preposition
at 4
Overall
from 1985 to 2003 oil stayed the main source of energy
production and other renewable resources remained the least.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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