The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table illustrates the percentage of the number of attendees to arts events in 20
years
in the UK.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the table that, the people
who attended just to see their favourite artist have the highest per cent in all periods, while
those who went for business have the lowest number.
To begin
with, those who went to see a performer 20 years
were 58%, then
10 years
ago 55%, but today they are 56%. Secondly
, regarding the people
accompanying their children, it’s clear to see that 20 years
ago just was 9%, 10 years
ago, 15% but today they are risen to reach 24%. Moreover
, there were 27% of people
attended because had a special occasion for 20 years
, and the next year after year the percentage decreased to 9% nowadays. In the ,
end we have some Remove the comma
apply
people
attending arts events for work, the number increased according to
the data, 6% in the past and 11% in the last
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