Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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It is true that
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jam is a challenging issue facing the modern world because the
uses
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of
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car
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are increasing day by day. I think it is
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statement for many reasons and
government
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can be tackled it by doing some steps. There are a number of reasons why I believe individuals like to use
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the car
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car
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cars
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and the
increase
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using
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the
car
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is
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great
traffic
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jsm
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jams
. One possible reason is that world becomes advanced
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that
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is why most normal vehicles are turned into
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a motorist vehicle
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such
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as a
car
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.
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,
people
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prefer to use
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car
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to reach their destination as soon as possible.
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, in the past public used to go
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anywhere by foot or
normal
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vehicle
such
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as a rickshaw,
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now
people
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use
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, taxi or
car
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to reach
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work , hospital and so on which are comfortable for them and do not need to do any hard work as like past they did. Another possible reason is that
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people
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income
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get higher rather than in the past. As
in
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the developed world has
variety
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a variety
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of
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,
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can get high salaries.
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, individuals want to lead luxurious,
well furnished
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and expensive
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lifestyles
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.
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,
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car
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is the only way to lead
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and
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lifestyle.
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,
peole
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people
want to represent their
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in
the
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society.
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this
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reason, they
purchase
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a
car
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.
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, rich
people
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in
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society prefer to buy a
car
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to show their class in front of
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people
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.
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of the moment,
people
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buy
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car
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for lots of reasons but it increases
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traffic
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congestion because we have
a
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limit
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areas and roads
whereas
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we
purchase
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a plethora of cars rapidly which are covered all the areas and roads and creates
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traffic
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a traffic
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jam.
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,
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government can be solved
by
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this by
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taking some steps.
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, the administration should put some strict rules and regulations. If the government do it, the
purchase
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of
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car
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will mitigate.
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, India is charging
to
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the
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people
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who are buying more than two
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car
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cars
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and it helps to decrease the
purchase
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of
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a car
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car
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cars
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.
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,
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authority
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should
increase
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the tax on
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car
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cars
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and
increase
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the prices of
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the car
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car
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cars
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.
Therefore
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, the
uses
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use
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of
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the car
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car
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cars
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will
be
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slow
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down. In conclusion,
traffic
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jam
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jams
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will
increase
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unless
peole
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people
do not control the buying of cars, do not
increase
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the price and tax on cars and do not focus on the law about
car
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purchasing.
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