Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?
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motorist vehicles
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status
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car
for lots of reasons but it increases the
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traffic
congestion because we have a
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by
taking some steps. Correct pronoun usage
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Firstly
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a car
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the
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people
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