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The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.

The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.
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The table demonstrates the consumption of advertisements of four car companies in the UK in 2002.
It is clear that
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 Renault spent the most money on advertising in 2002.
In addition
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, TV advertisements were the most popular advertising, but the Cinema was the opposite. In 2002, $59
million
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 was spent on TV commercials by Renault, and only $45
million
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 by Rover. Meanwhile, Cetirizine spent $70
million
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 on TV advertisements
while
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 the figure for Vauxhall was a bit lower, a $65
million
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. Regarding press advertising, the amount of money spent by Renault was 45$
million
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 and was the most, slightly higher than Rover, at $38
million
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.
In contrast
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, Vauxhall and Cetirizine only paid $8
million
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 and $12
million
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 on press advertising.
On the other hand
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, advertising in cinemas and outdoors incurred the lowest costs, with less than $10
million
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 spent by each company. In terms of Radio advertising, it was very special when the expenditure on radio advertising was all similar, at 15$
million
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.

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