You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.

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Dear Sir or Madam, One month ago, I bought an online Lenovo

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from your store. Unfortunately, the product has suddenly stopped working and is impossible to switch on. I really need

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to complete my homework and I hope you will repair it soon. In relation to the specifics of the problem, the

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screen does not show anything except a black screen with some red dots on it. It looked overheated. It worked just fine the day before yesterday. I checked the battery, and power connection and tried to realise from the sound of the

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that the problem is with the monitor. My purchase number is 0946 567 406. I attached a copy of my receipt. I should finish

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exercise before the end of

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month. If my

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does not work, I am unable to finalise it.

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, I have important files, software and in-progress project instructions on

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which means I am stuck without them. I need

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device fixed immediately so I hope you would help me resolve the problem in the next few days or replace it with a new one and transfer the data. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, PL

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

211 words

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