You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.

#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company

Dear Sir or Madam, One month ago, I bought an online Lenovo

desktop

computer

from your store. Unfortunately, the product has suddenly stopped working and is impossible to switch on. I really need

this

desktop

computer

to complete my homework and I hope you will repair it soon. In relation to the specifics of the problem, the

desktop

computer

screen does not show anything except a black screen with some red dots on it. It looked overheated. It worked just fine the day before yesterday. I checked the battery, and power connection and tried to realise from the sound of the

desktop

computer

that the problem is with the monitor. My purchase number is 0946 567 406. I attached a copy of my receipt. I should finish

this

exercise before the end of

this

month. If my

desktop

computer

does not work, I am unable to finalise it.

Besides

, I have important files, software and in-progress project instructions on

this

desktop

computer

which means I am stuck without them. I need

this

device fixed immediately so I hope you would help me resolve the problem in the next few days or replace it with a new one and transfer the data. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, PL

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

211 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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