It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.
In recent years no negative emotions and try to understand each other. family is spending time together and understanding each other.
families
Use synonyms
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last
their emotional connection with each other. Correct your spelling
lost
This
essay will discuss the main reasons Linking Words
of
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for
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this
Change the determiner
this relationship
these relationships
relationships
among Use synonyms
families
and propose possible solutions to decrease the number of Use synonyms
such
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families
. One of the main reasons for Use synonyms
such
bad Linking Words
relationships
is a lack of interest Use synonyms
to
children from their Change preposition
in
parents
. Use synonyms
In other words
, nowadays Linking Words
parents
do not provide enough attention and support to their offspring, as they are at work Use synonyms
their
whole time. In Change the word
the
this
case in general the dominant numbers of the family could not notice if their kids had any moral issues. Linking Words
Secondly
, some Linking Words
parents
do not listen to their children. As a rule, they pay Use synonyms
significantly
attention to their marks at school. Change the adverb
significant
This
is the reason many children are unheard Linking Words
and
unloved since their Change preposition
of and
parents
are focused on the child’s success. Use synonyms
As a result
, a child Linking Words
becomes with
psychological issues and in some cases especially teens tend to do some wrongdoings to draw the attention of their closest people, Verb problem
has
parents
. It may significantly influence on child’s future. Spending more time together is the key to good Use synonyms
relationships
and the atmosphere in the family. Use synonyms
Families
should provide any Use synonyms
team building
activities that will connect each member's family. Add a hyphen
team-building
For example
, Linking Words
sport
games Change the noun form
sports
such
as volleyball, football, and basketball are Linking Words
a
good variants of team games. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Furthermore
, they should discuss the problems with each otherLinking Words
Change preposition
with
To sum
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up
all stated above, the main solution to bad Add a comma
up,
relationships
inUse synonyms
Correct article usage
a
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Stick to this essay structure:
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