The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men andwomen in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentage of
Australian
men
and women
in various age
groups who exercised in 2010 by gender.
With the exception of those between the ages of 15 and 24, more Australian
men
than women
exercised in 2010.
In 2010, 52.8% of Australian
women
aged 15 to 24 exercised, placing them best among all age
groups. The percentage of Australian
males who exercised at the same ages
was 47.7%. Females aged 45–54 and 55–64 who exercised in 2010 showed similar trends, with 42.2% and 43.1%, respectively, being lower than the average for Fix the agreement mistake
age
men
of the same age
group by roughly 10%. The difference between male and female participation in regular physical exercise reached 12% among those aged 35 to 44 in 2010. At a total of 39.5%, the women
's figure at this
age
was the lowest of all ages. The proportion of Australian
men
and women
who exercised was similar in the population 65 years and older; the males reached 47.1%, which was slightly higher than the percentage of women
(0.4%).Submitted by 2844315408 on
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