The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line graph illustrates the
number
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of passengers on London's Underground Station from 6 to 10 o'
clock
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.
Overall
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, there were massive fluctuations, but the
number
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of
people
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in the subway was increasing throughout the day. The highest
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of
people
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was at 8
hours
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. At 6
hours
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there were 100
people
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in the underground,
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it dramatically increased to 400
people
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at 8
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before the
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decreased to just under 200 at 10
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in the morning.
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it steadily rose to just under 300
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, but
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to 300
people
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at 14
hours
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. From 14 to 16
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, there was a significant fall from 300 to 100
people
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.
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it increased massively, at first to 200
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at 17 o'
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and
then
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to around 360 at 18 o'
clock
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. After that, the
number
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of
people
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dropped to approximately 150 at 20 o'
clock
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,
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but
then
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increased to around 200
people
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, clock, people, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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