The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the number
of passengers on London's Underground Station from 6 to 10 o'clock
.
Overall
, there were massive fluctuations, but the number
of people
in the subway was increasing throughout the day. The highest number
of people
was at 8 hours
.
At 6 hours
there were 100 people
in the underground, then
it dramatically increased to 400 people
at 8 hours
before the number
decreased to just under 200 at 10 hours
in the morning. Then
it steadily rose to just under 300 people
, but then
to 300 people
at 14 hours
.
From 14 to 16 hours
, there was a significant fall from 300 to 100 people
. Then
it increased massively, at first to 200 people
at 17 o'clock
and then
to around 360 at 18 o'clock
. After that, the number
of people
dropped to approximately 150 at 20 o'clock
,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
increased to around 200 people
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