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The given bar graph shows the estimated continent-wise increase in food production (in million MT) needed to feed the world population in 2045. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar graph shows the estimated continent-wise increase in food production (in million MT) needed to feed the world population in 2045. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the increase in
production
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the production
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 of
food
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 in Africa, Asia, North
America
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, South
America
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 and Europe which is measured in
million
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metric
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of metric
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ton’s
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tons
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 to cater
the
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for the
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 hunger needs of the population in 2045. The data is collected from the United Nations
Food
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 Agricultural Organisation. It is observed that the chart depicts that the average
food
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 production in Africa is 400
million
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 metric
ton’s
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 which is comparatively the highest compared to that of the other continents.
On the contrary
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, Europe produces the least.
Likewise
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, South
America
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 produces 50
million
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 metric
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ton’s
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tons
ton
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 by 2045.
Whereas
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 Asia
on the other hand
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 produces about 40
million
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 metric
ton’s
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 which is relatively low compared to that of South
America
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.
However
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, North
America
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 produces almost about 25% which is more than that
of
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apply
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Europe.
Overall
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, Africa produces seven times more than South
America
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 as per the data collected by the United Nations
Food
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 Agriculture Organisation which invariably depicts the increase in population by 2045.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, america, million, ton’s with synonyms.
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