The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.
Given are on the maps illustrate how to changes in 2008 and today in
science
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the science
park
.Overall
,as can be seen from the graph that the most crucial changes
in 2008 , offices and reception situated
northeast corner.There are a lot of places in the Add a missing verb
were situated
science
park
.for example
IT
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the IT
centre
and Cyber security located opposite .
The railway past
in Correct your spelling
passed
their
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there
while
the trees sited behind the IT centre
.
The Car park
placed in the heart of the science
park
and also
business units was in front of car
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the car
park
.there are
grassland northwest Correct subject-verb agreement
is
in
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of
science
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the science
a science
park
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apply
presently
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present
firstly
research and development appeared instead
of grassland and also
fro m
reception Correct your spelling
from
to
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of
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the univercity
univercity
hub altered .Correct your spelling
university
Car
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The car
park
and business units are not changed . Innovation
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The innovation
centre
constructed
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was constructed
instead
of IT
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the IT
centre
and also
station built
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was built
Innovation
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the Innovation
centre
and cyber security . Cycle path came into view in the science
park
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