The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.
The presented maps indicate differences
a
science Change preposition
in a
park
from 2008 till now.Generally,there was
not a lot of buildings Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
, nevertheless
, today the science park
has a
many facilities and amenities.
The picture clearly shows thatCorrect the article-noun agreement
apply
,
a large area above the business units was just grassland, but now there is Remove the comma
apply
research
and development Correct article usage
a research
center
.Now, turning to Change the spelling
centre
the
Remove the article
apply
another
side of business units we can see woodland Correct quantifier usage
other
and
still unchanged
Let's, Correct word choice
apply
turning
to the small details.Pay attention to cyberspace it was a bit small, Wrong verb form
turn
nonetheless
, it has changed a bit and is now beautifull
.It is clearly seen that Correct your spelling
beautiful
cycle
path which is very Correct article usage
the cycle
usefull
for children before Correct your spelling
useful
it
wasn't.The next change is compact parking and if you look carefully, there is Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
a bus stop on the other side of the park
All in all, the picture shows much needed
changes in the science Add a hyphen
much-needed
park
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