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The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
#maps #show #changes #town
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the 2 maps infest the modifications that have been
happened
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 in town from 1995
untill
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until
 now.
overall
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,the town witnessed
transfoemation
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transformation
 sharply from
rural
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a rural
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 area to more urban. to initiate with,the 2rows of
housings
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housing
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 alongside
road
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the road
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 to the
north west
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northwest
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 of
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map
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the map
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 and 4 houses have remained constant.
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,
cafe
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the cafe
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at
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 the
south east
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southeast
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of
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apply
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map
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the map
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 facing with hotel remained
unchanagable
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unchangeable
unmanageable
.
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,
sea
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the sea
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 which is alongside
road
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the road
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 to the south of
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map
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the map
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have
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 not altered. concerning evolution areas,there
were
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 farmland at
far
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the far
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 corner of
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map
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the map
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 where
forest
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a forest
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 park
loacted
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located
 at bottom of
it
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its
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 shift to golf and tennis respectively.
shops
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Shops
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 and
fishingmarkets
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fishing markets
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to
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with
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 restaurants and adjoining apartments to the south of
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map
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the map
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;
furtheremore
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furthermore
, bellow them
fishing
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the fishing
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 port has removed totally .
Car
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A car
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park
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parks
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 have been constructed next to the hotel.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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