Today we can see excessive consumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, oil and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimise the effects?

This
is the golden era, which we are passing. In
this
21 century most of the massive development happening through technological assistance. For
this
,reason our natural
resources
will be decreasing and threaten our planet. My point of view is that
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we should see the effects and to
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reduce sustainable development. In our daily life, we are depending on
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natural
resources
which
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used in different ways. In our ,industry we are
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a lot of products and
also
this
is a daily requirement for our life.
For example
, need natural gas for cooking and fuel for need vehicles for transportation. We cannot stop
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in our industry and transport, if we stop it
then
all things will be stacked.
This
whole world will be hampered in making food and leading transport. And we are using some
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natural energy for mining to take diamonds and another kind of demandable metals. ,
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we waste a lot of natural
resources
on
this
work. So we cannot control it by making rules and regulations, if people are not conscious of
this
abuse
then
they will fall hamper. For that reason, some
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international bodies are focusing on and making regulations for using
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innate
resources
. Now they are bounded by
this
regulation
otherwise
they cannot get any support from
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international bodies. If I give one example about
this
issue; every textile industry should be made an ETP(Feuillet treatment process) system
otherwise
they cannot get any certification from an international body. They cannot sell any textile items to the international market so they can easily be motivated by these regulations and they will try to sustain it. In
this
conclusion, we should not depend on natural
resources
in our every type of work and need to develop new energy which is not effective for our new world.
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