The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The line graph demonstrates the quantity of shut-up
shops
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and start-up
shops
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in a country during the period from 2011 to 2018. At first glance,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of markets opened is higher than the ones closed in 2011,
whereas
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, the opposite happened in 2018.
Furthermore
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, when comparing the two lines, it is apparent that there was a sharp drop in the statistics of shop openings between 2011 and 2012,
while
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conversely
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, the shop closures trend fell drastically between 2014 and 2015. From 2011 to 2014, the
number
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of
shops
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that closed fluctuated a great deal between 6,000 and 7,100 with an average of 6,300.
However
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, by 2014, the record collapsed to 500 in 2015. After that, there was a significant rise till 2016 at 5,100. From 2016 to 2018, there was little to no change in the
number
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of markets that went belly up.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of
shops
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opened dramatically declined to around 4,000 in 2012.
Then
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, there was a marked upward trend in the total of retail establishments, and by 2014, the record was 6,000.
Nevertheless
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, it dropped steadily to 4,000 in 2015 and remained stable until 2016. Later, the figure increased by 1,000 in 2017 and decreased gradually to 3000 in 2018. In summary, there is an
overall
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increase in the
number
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of
shops
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closed during the period 2011-2018,
whereas
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in the same period, the
number
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of
shops
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opened rose in total.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • steady
  • decline
  • increase
  • peak
  • trough
  • magnitude
  • trend
  • surpass
  • plummet
  • annual
  • consecutive
  • closure rate
  • inception rate
  • net growth
  • commercial landscape
  • retail sector
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