Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter - give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#council #sports #leisure #centre #money #friends #community #effects #people #addresses #sir #madam

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Dear Man/Madam my name is Daniel Kong, I am writing

this

letter to let you know we do not want to close our local

sports

and leisure

centre

. there have many advantages to keeping open

this

entertainment

centre

Firstly

, my parents go to the leisure

centre

several a week, they have a chat group in

this

centre

, and they really enjoy and share positive stories with each other.

Furthermore

, there has a fitness gym in the

sports

centre

, it is really useful, I and my wife go three times a week, which is effective to release pressure during work.

Also

, I have two little boys which are 10 years old, and they just apply a basketball team at their school, we are planning to train their shooting skills when they have free time in the

sports

centre

Secondly

, there only have these

sports

and leisure centres near to us, if the council closes these centres, we have to drive about 30 mins to keep doing what we usually do, which is an inconvenience. I hope the council can consider dealing with

this

issue. All the best Daniel Kong

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