The bar chart below shows percentages of three groups of Australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows percentages of three groups of Australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012.  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives the information on proportions of
children
ranging from 5 to 16 in Australia participating in four different activities, including watching TV, reading, art, and riding a bike in 2012.
Overall
, we clearly see that watching TV was the most popular activity among the three different groups of
children
,
while
art attracts relatively fewer kids. As regarded as the first, the percentage of watching TV ranges from a low of 96% between 5 to 8
years
old to a high of 99% between 12 to 16
years
old, with some
children
aged 9 to 11
years
old at 97% in between. For art, there are more
children
from 5 to 8
years
old than those from 9 to 11
years
old who loved it, and the figure for it was 60% in comparison with 57%.
Additionally
,
it is clear that
the same proportion accounting for 65% of those youth from 9 to 11
years
old and from 12 to 16
years
old chose reading,
whereas
62% of youth between 5 to 8 took part in the reading activity.
Finally
, there was 81% of youth between 12 to 16 engaged in riding a bike,
while
78% of
children
between 5 to 8 were in the same category, followed by those from 9 to 11 stood at about 62%.
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