The bar chart below shows percentages of three groups of Australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives the information on proportions of
children
ranging from 5 to 16 in Australia participating in four different activities, including watching TV, reading, art, and riding a bike in 2012.
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Overall
, we clearly see that watching TV was the most popular activity among the three different groups of Linking Words
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art attracts relatively fewer kids.
As regarded as the first, the percentage of watching TV ranges from a low of 96% between 5 to 8 Linking Words
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old to a high of 99% between 12 to 16 Use synonyms
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old at 97% in between. For art, there are more Use synonyms
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old who loved it, and the figure for it was 60% in comparison with 57%.
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it is clear that
the same proportion accounting for 65% of those youth from 9 to 11 Linking Words
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old chose reading, Use synonyms
whereas
62% of youth between 5 to 8 took part in the reading activity. Linking Words
Finally
, there was 81% of youth between 12 to 16 engaged in riding a bike, Linking Words
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78% of Linking Words
children
between 5 to 8 were in the same category, followed by those from 9 to 11 stood at about 62%.Use synonyms
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