The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays five different industries’ contributions to Brazil's
economy
as percentages of the total, in the years 2009, 2019 and 2029, with intervals of a
decade
. Clearly, the Finance sector had the greatest contribution to Brazil’s
economy
, and it is expected to do so in the future as well.
Secondly
,
Tourism
,
as well as
Fossil Fuels, are major contributors, and
lastly
, Food Processing and Manufacturing play a role in the total
economy
of Brazil. Going into
further
detail, one-third of Brazil’s
economy
in 2009 was Finance, and
this
increased by 5% a
decade
later and is expected to jump another 5% by 2029, at which time, it will be roughly 45% of the total. The second greatest contributors to the
economy
in 2009 were both
Tourism
,
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and Fossil Fuels at roughly a quarter of the total. A
decade
later,
Tourism
dropped to a fifth;
however
, Oil and Gas increased to about a third of the
economy
. In 2029,
Tourism
is expected to be proportionally the same as in 2019, but Oil and Gas are expected to contribute about 5% less than the previous
decade
.
Finally
, Food Processing and Manufacturing make up one-fifth or less of Brazil’s
economy
in any given year, and these industries tend to have much variability; Manufacturing decreases greatly with each
decade
. In summary, Finance is the strongest economic sector, both past and future, as where the other sectors change from
decade
to
decade
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words economy, decade, tourism with synonyms.
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