The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
In the given bar chart we can see that in 1995 almost 50% of
people
were born in the city of
Australia
in addition
20% were born in
towns
and 30% were born in the rural
areas
of
Australia
. There were 60% of
people
were born outside the cities of
Australia
and 10% of
people
were born in
towns
outside
Australia
and 40% of
people
were born in rural
areas
outside of
Australia
If we have a look at the bar chart of 2010 there were approximately 65% of
people
were born in the city in
Australia
and approximately 15% of
people
were born in both
towns
and rural
areas
of
Australia
. 80% of
people
were born in the city outside of
Australia
whereas
10% were born in
towns
outside
Australia
and 5% were born in rural
areas
outside of
Australia
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, towns, areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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