Some people argue that there should be a common punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminals who carry it out. On the other hand, others suggest that the comditions under which the criminal commits a crime should be taken into consideration before deciding the punishment. How far do you agree or disagree with the arguments presented ?

In today's world, the ongoing process of economic recession has led to an increase in

crime

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rate

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. The nature of most criminal activities

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evolved over the past few years. Some believe that all

criminals

should

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responsible in

a

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same way, for conducting a similar

crime

.

However

, others argue that surroundings affect the nature of a certain

crime

and judgement should be made considering

this

fact. I advocate

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the view that certain

crimes

need a common punishment to make an

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affective

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effective

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law system.

To begin

with, increasing poverty and

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for the survival of the fittest,

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bred many

criminals

in

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developing countries.

For instance

, street

crime

and robbery have increased dramatically in

contemperary

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contemporary

times.

Majority

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of the population in an underdeveloped country strives for basic

necessaties

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necessities

of life and indulge themselves in illegal ways of earning more money. These

crimes

result from economic

unstability

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instability

and

such

criminals

come from similar backgrounds.

Furthermore

,

crimes

such

as

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rape and murder are a product of one's social, mental and cultural status. These

crimes

are independent of surrounding conditions and there is no

explaination

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explanation

for them.

For instance

, rapistis argue that wearing revealing clothes

provoke

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them.

This

is a mythological ideology because doing

such

crimes

are dependent on one's moment of weakness. I believe that most

crimes

originate from the same background and punishing them in a similar way is time efficient method of bringing law and order to the country. Rape and murder cases should not involve

trail

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,

instead

, directly announcing the punishment results in

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systematic approach. In the

above mentioned

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view,

increasing

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the increasing

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crime

rate is a main concern of developing countries as social stability is necessary to make peace in a living environment. Government should make policies of punishing

criminals

to revive

crime-less

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a crime-less

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society and bring safety to the country. Allocated punishments for similar

crimes

is

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are

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an efficient method of

controling

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controlling

crime

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the crime

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rate.