The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below provides us with information about the quantity of male and female employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. The
overall
trend is a decline in total employees but there is a growth in the total of factories. So, the table shows us, that there was a dramatic decrease in the number of man workers from 287,100 to 131,780 in 1861, and in the number of female employees from 160,000 to 60,000 in 1871.
Then
we see a slight decline in 1881, and by 1901 the number of male workers made up 31.000, at the same time there were 30.000 women workers. The
quantity
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of manufactures was growing till 1881 and had risen from 225 to 721 manufactures.
Then
there was a small fall and by 1901 the total of manufactures was 600. In a nutshell, a dramatic decrease in the total of labourers, both men and women and
such
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of factories demonstrates big industrialisation and automatisation of the working process.
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